Meh.
It was sort of clever in its own little way but I found myself wishing I hadn't wasted ten minutes playing it afterwards. I really liked the art style a lot, but there was too much too read and it wasn't very well written. Plus, the gameplay itself was pretty mindnumbing. If you work on your script and put more effort into the "game" part of the "game", you can really have something with part 2, but as it is this had no business on the front page.